tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.comments2012-10-02T17:38:36.220+01:00Chapter by ChapterSonjahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comBlogger47125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-19123851669823367922012-10-02T17:38:36.220+01:002012-10-02T17:38:36.220+01:00That is the trouble with writing. If you're n...That is the trouble with writing. If you're not in the zone, it is so difficult. You will get there though - I know you will. :-)Annie Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00591260925382173975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-64814604797109749792011-11-01T16:54:38.294+00:002011-11-01T16:54:38.294+00:00Hi. This is like a really late comment to your pos...Hi. This is like a really late comment to your post, but I've only just seen it, thanks to the REN3 thing. I just wanted to say, I understand. I am painfully shy and often get very overwhelmed by all the social network things. So, I just wanted to say hi... Hi.Kwee Cats and Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16650228469037436925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-52936661951583844292011-10-29T22:45:16.086+01:002011-10-29T22:45:16.086+01:00And...The End! What a journey it has been! And now...And...The End! What a journey it has been! And now begins the hardest part: the judging!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-68120715106818912752011-10-29T09:36:19.765+01:002011-10-29T09:36:19.765+01:00Good to see that Garrett found it in him to do som...Good to see that Garrett found it in him to do something good. Nice touch with Cluthe's death. That way everything is the way it would have been without the water. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-17745653527022628202011-10-28T21:04:28.267+01:002011-10-28T21:04:28.267+01:00Thanks David, I couldn't answer as many questi...Thanks David, I couldn't answer as many questions as I had wanted, but I did my best in 600 words :0)<br /><br />Cheers Joshua, I think their finals deaths were due to lack of words...death by word count lol =DSonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-10892737009482807322011-10-28T13:34:04.980+01:002011-10-28T13:34:04.980+01:00Too bad about Cluthe, and Garrett's crossing, ...Too bad about Cluthe, and Garrett's crossing, but 'twas a great wrap-up. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-25272936518116424892011-10-28T00:11:13.349+01:002011-10-28T00:11:13.349+01:00I do appreciate a happy ending, since the last few...I do appreciate a happy ending, since the last few I read weren't. Not that they were bad. I enjoyed the feeling of hope your ending provided. Thanks for being a part of the party! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-21518742540037964562011-10-25T21:04:04.632+01:002011-10-25T21:04:04.632+01:00Hi Guys,
It's been another busy week, so sorr...Hi Guys,<br /><br />It's been another busy week, so sorry for not acknowledging your commments until now...<br /><br />David, thanks so much...I love a bit of magic in a story...it's the kind of thing I grew up on, and, I guess, my enjoyment of it never went away.<br /><br />Jana, cheers...hopefully all should be revealed in the final installment...<br /><br />Misha, he is a bit of a tool...I thought he was going to be more sinister, but he ended up being a bit self-interested and weak. :0)<br /><br />Li, thanks. There are a lot of interesting ideas out there, I've been working my way through them steadily...reckon I'll still be reading them after the comp is through.<br /><br />Stu, I have to say...I'm a bit nervous about my wrap-up...there are a lot of flapping ends to tie down!<br /><br />Joshua, cheers...I hope so...still tormented by the 600 word limit...6,000 might be closer to what I need...will have to do some hard work on it!<br /><br />Stu...that is VERY exciting for me...can't wait to read your final installment =D (I'm grinning like an idiot)Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-12359652859044162802011-10-25T21:04:03.141+01:002011-10-25T21:04:03.141+01:00Hi Guys,
It's been another busy week, so sorr...Hi Guys,<br /><br />It's been another busy week, so sorry for not acknowledging your commments until now...<br /><br />David, thanks so much...I love a bit of magic in a story...it's the kind of thing I grew up on, and, I guess, my enjoyment of it never went away.<br /><br />Jana, cheers...hopefully all should be revealed in the final installment...<br /><br />Misha, he is a bit of a tool...I thought he was going to be more sinister, but he ended up being a bit self-interested and weak. :0)<br /><br />Li, thanks. There are a lot of interesting ideas out there, I've been working my way through them steadily...reckon I'll still be reading them after the comp is through.<br /><br />Stu, I have to say...I'm a bit nervous about my wrap-up...there are a lot of flapping ends to tie down!<br /><br />Joshua, cheers...I hope so...still tormented by the 600 word limit...6,000 might be closer to what I need...will have to do some hard work on it!<br /><br />Stu...that is VERY exciting for me...can't wait to read your final installment =D (I'm grinning like an idiot)Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-43457084046375783022011-10-24T16:04:00.497+01:002011-10-24T16:04:00.497+01:00This should have a very interesting conclusion wit...This should have a very interesting conclusion with week four. Can't wait.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-81961145475913994922011-10-21T22:11:25.228+01:002011-10-21T22:11:25.228+01:00I’ve been by to read your entry. All I can say is ...I’ve been by to read your entry. All I can say is judging will be tough! Bring on Week 4!<br /><br />J.C.J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-75938932025493121972011-10-21T12:19:31.028+01:002011-10-21T12:19:31.028+01:00Making my way through the Week 3 entries :-) Cool...Making my way through the Week 3 entries :-) Cool detail, about the brown grass being rejuvenated by the spilled water.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-44054804146524230922011-10-21T05:20:37.333+01:002011-10-21T05:20:37.333+01:00I love that he's stuck as a ghost. Not that I ...I love that he's stuck as a ghost. Not that I like him. He's a bit of an ass. <br /><br />Still, I can't wait to see how the story ends. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-64191903003487046382011-10-21T04:19:33.896+01:002011-10-21T04:19:33.896+01:00very interesting. I'm curious to know what'...very interesting. I'm curious to know what's so important about the journal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-65428877427218473462011-10-20T23:36:51.193+01:002011-10-20T23:36:51.193+01:00Interesting installment! Love the touch of magic y...Interesting installment! Love the touch of magic you have in here. Subtle and not in your face. Just the way I like it. Great job! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-9086159080177870472011-10-20T23:06:44.739+01:002011-10-20T23:06:44.739+01:00Sorry not to have replied sooner, I've been a ...Sorry not to have replied sooner, I've been a little bit poorly this week...on the mend though, so won't complain - much! ;0)<br /><br />Li - Shhh, don't tell anyone, but I'm pretty interested to find out myself. =D<br /><br />Kelworthfiles - thanks, it's a tricky one...how much do you reveal and what do you keep hidden? Bit like life really ;0)<br /><br />Barbara - hopefully part 3 will tell you that...*she crosses fingers* :0)<br /><br />Golden Eagle - thanks very much...Garrett is the third character...hope the revelations answer some of your questions :0)Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-69904325000313449022011-10-19T22:17:22.460+01:002011-10-19T22:17:22.460+01:00I want to know what's up with Garrett--I was s...I want to know what's up with Garrett--I was surprised Cluthe could see him! Great entry. :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-13750931977605957482011-10-16T02:53:45.690+01:002011-10-16T02:53:45.690+01:00So is Garrett surprised because Cluthe can see him...So is Garrett surprised because Cluthe can see him or cause Cluthe can save the town? Hope Garrett is the next POV character.Barbara V. Evershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350675979426950166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-88136279912741820232011-10-15T21:10:58.294+01:002011-10-15T21:10:58.294+01:00Interesting stuff. I love the hints about the Vent...Interesting stuff. I love the hints about the Venti.<br /><br />Thanks for travelling to Renaissance with us!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-43428363755114510622011-10-15T19:19:40.187+01:002011-10-15T19:19:40.187+01:00Ugh - impaled by a branch. Will be interesting to ...Ugh - impaled by a branch. Will be interesting to see how the town can be saved...Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-68651952829345248782011-10-15T13:38:30.736+01:002011-10-15T13:38:30.736+01:00Stu, wells get a bad rap ;0) lol
Deniz, thanks......Stu, wells get a bad rap ;0) lol<br /><br />Deniz, thanks...me too =D<br /><br />Misha, The narrator is third person, an omnipresence...therefore it's not Mr Cluthe that knows Garrett's name, but the narrator.Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-42856854921564233782011-10-15T12:59:01.306+01:002011-10-15T12:59:01.306+01:00How did the old man know the kid's name is Gar...How did the old man know the kid's name is Garrett?Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-69376181850129911462011-10-14T20:19:26.263+01:002011-10-14T20:19:26.263+01:00Ooh, mysterious. Can't wait to see how all the...Ooh, mysterious. Can't wait to see how all the ends are tied up.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-51310602384645710292011-10-14T00:27:01.794+01:002011-10-14T00:27:01.794+01:00Been by to have a read – sorry I can’t say too muc...Been by to have a read – sorry I can’t say too much while judging!<br /><br />J.C.J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-405650522249904175.post-66112797004540531752011-10-13T09:54:41.046+01:002011-10-13T09:54:41.046+01:00Thanks for the comments,
Kurt - I thought I knew ...Thanks for the comments,<br /><br />Kurt - I thought I knew the answer to that question, but now I'm not so sure... :0)<br /><br />David, thanks. I'm really enjoying the prompts...although the story is going pretty much in the direction I thought it would, I didn't know that Cluthe may or may not die!<br /><br />Joshua, thanks...I didn't know he was going to be so sinister...I foudn that development quite interesting.<br /><br />Jana, thanks...in getting the word count down I had a lot to cut...it's difficult to find the balance between economy of words and actually putting across the story.<br /><br />I have to say, I am really enjoyig this blogfest :0)Sonjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18433094727700674981noreply@blogger.com